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God this song is just beautiful! I love it.
The center segment of what sounds like coffeehouse/restaurant background noise: not too long, not too short - good length and added such a nice depth to the song. During the transition into the ending instrumental, I was struck with the still image of a tired looking Superman, tattered cape and all, camera circling 360 rapidly around him while the world is going about its business completely unaware of him, and the ending was like the one kid that runs up to him as he's walking away, and hands him a flower, then him flying off with a smile remembering why he does what he does (I'm such a geek. I know.)
Truly marvelous job all around here.
Yanno, I know you said that you don't like the tone of your voice, but can I just say, I think you do yourself disservice.
Your backup here is perfect. You and Pat (that's the lead's name, right?) complement one another very well.
But...
I would love to hear
you sing lead on this song. You have a wonderful voice Brin.
Just my opinion of course, but I really think that your tonality and singing style fit this song much better than his does.
Please don't dismiss the future possibility that you will sing lead in some and Pat on others, even if only periodically.
Bravo and so well done! If this was out on a single, I would buy it.